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[The First Wave]

Don't be fooled by that 6.

I can tell you put a lot of effort into this. I know flash is hard at first (it'll only get harder). The planes were very well drawn, I don't know how you might have done them but well done. The markings on the sides of the planes do change from plane to plane, so you might want to change them for episode 2 rather than just copying them. It didn't make a big deal but considering you put so much effort in already I wouldn't have thought it'd be that hard.

You have the same problem as I did with my first flashes, it goes very slow. You end up watching a plane fly by for about 10 seconds, which is far too long. To improve the quality of the flash, especially one like this, it's good to make the action more fast-paced and intense to give you the feeling that the planes are going really quick (as they obviously would have been). Would also be nice to see a human element to the movie other than the officers around the radar table, maybe a pilot or two so we actually know who's gonna be getting shot at, that would increase the depth of the story a bit.

The only graphically disappointing bit was the fire on the radar station at the end, it looked totally wrong. I find fire is better drawn by doing each frame seperately rather than trying to tween a single graphic, because it ends up looking like a blob moving around pointlessly.

Another thing is sound, I realise sounds for this kind of stuff is hard to come across. I find a good resource for sounds are games, do you have any flying games? If you go into the Local Disk (C: Drive) and go into program files, you can usually access sound effects from your own computer games. You can also download sound effects from websites like flashkit.

Anyway, I hope that I've given you a few things to work with anyway. The main thing that needs sorting is definately the speed of it... Speed it up, viewers don't need to stare at a plane ambling past slowly for any great length of time!

Good luck, anyway. I look forward to Part Two. Let's hope that Britain will crush the Nazi horde. :oD

6/10

critiqUe109 responds:

The flying games were just the oldies i had in my storage. It was still a good use. The game was Red Baron II, it was on the credits.

[How to make a good Flash2]

Haha, that was really good!

That was really funny, erm.. I don't know what to say now... Good job!

10/10

Muffinator responds:

Thanks! ^-^

[Icons Ep 2]

Haha

That was really quite funny! Are the characters based on yourself and other people, or just random made-up people?

<<SPOILER, DON'T READ UNLESS YOU'VE SEEN THE MOVIE>>

Whatever it is, you should make more like this. My favourite bit was in the basement when he said he had too many cocks in his eyeballs. That was really funny. :D

Anyways, I'm surprised this has only got 13 reviews (so far). It really is good. Good luck in the future.

10/10

TheTreeman responds:

the characters are based off real people.

[How to make a good Flash]

Haha, that was really good!

That was really funny, erm.. I don't know what to say now... Good job!

10/10

Muffinator responds:

Thankyou.

[America: It's not rubbish]

Hmmm...

Wow, a lot of people would disagree with this. This is a mild form of Exoxenopatriotism (my made-up word meaning someone who likes another country more than their own). Certainly, Americans are the fattest... Highest yokel rate... They are certainly good at a lot of things... like wearing loud Hawaiian shirts when on holiday (vacation). I like certain parts of American culture, such as American "Football" though they barely use their feet and they have the loud "we're more important than you" attitude to use the term soccer when referring to English (and real) Football, where we do use our feet, all the time. And yes, I realise that English people came up with both the 'soccer' and 'football' names.
Yeah, these kinds of animations seem to spark up essays by people who love/hate America. I wouldn't live there, but I wouldn't mind being a teenager there. Too late for me though... I'm over 18. Hey something that really sucks for Americans, they'll have to wait 3 more years than me to start legally drinking. ;o)

America, fuck yeah?

LeoZ responds:

Hey glad you liked it. This cartoon doesn;t rwally have a point; I'm neither pro nor anti America. America to me is just another country, albeit a rather 'powerful' country, but I have been to loads of countries which rock harder than the States. I didn't make it to diss America nor glorify it. I mostly made it bacuse it's an awesome song.

[Flight of Colour 2]

Ich werde Sie, Sie dumm faggot ficken

Es war das süßeste, das emotionalste Stück der ich von der Scheiße je habe gesehen.. Es war schön. Es war wie Zuschauen von einer manga Karikatur oder wie Spielen von Endgültiger Phantasie VII oder eine Scheiße wie das. Ich weine tatsächlich jetzt schauend von das zu. Engel.. Schwerter.. Tod.. Er hat sie gestochen, weil sie ihn gehasst hat. Klassisches Material. Ficken Sie, Fotze, Scheiße, Pisst, Twat, Arsch. Machen Sie einen anderen Ein so ich kann weinen alle über wieder.

RoobyKillAll responds:

Froh, Sie zu hören mochte es. Seien Sie sicher, ein Auge für Flug von Farbe 3 heraus zu halten. Ich werde vermutlich sie bald beginnen... Dank für den Bericht. Und ja, benutzte ich einen Übersetzer, um Ihren Pfosten zu verstehen. Aber das ist okay.

[The Banana Movie]

Uh huh that was pretty retarded

But whatever, I gave you five out of ten. Which isn't bad.

Poison-Rat responds:

yes

[Happy New Years!]

Nice!

Well done, staring at that clock makes me realise that Americans have a lot longer to wait than us British'uns. Sucks to be you. You can wish us all a happy new year at 7 o' clock Yankee time. If you live on the Pacific coast... God help you, not that he would. Oh well I'm done being obnoxious, bye!

Happie Nieuw Year!

Vector88 responds:

Lol... that's a bit mean :P.... Anyway, it'll come... it's only a matter of time... >:D :P

[Badly Drawn Battlebots]

Nice one.

I thought this was good.
The robots looked totally shit which was good. The plot was average, which was good. The <scene missing> bit was hilarious, which was good. If I had blinked when that came on I woulda missed it, so I'm glad I didn't.
This was shit, but that's why it's good so I'd say make more, but don't. Please.
Incase you were thinking of making a sequel, don't. This is gold, and a sequel would destroy the blam-shield that this has.

Good, and bad effort. 10/10

SomethingRandom responds:

Your a retard, but i like you.
What you said made no fucking sense. But ill take it in.
Fuck you, but thanks.
Sorry, i was using your style of reviewing